Monday, June 23, 2008

The door was open..

ok sometimes a poem or somethings starts brewing in my head and untill i get it down, it remains there, i dont know where the inspiration comes from. it just does. Now i have decided to share. Hope you enjoy:


I strolled out into his gates,
There was no one there.
not a soul insight
No one to stop me.

i walked towards the doors
i ran my hands across the smooth mahogany doors
i knocked 1ce, no answer
knocked again 2ce for emphases.
still nothing
i turned the handle
the door was open

stepping in through the doors
i called out his name.
it echoed into the air
nothing, not a sound

taking a few more steps
i looked about. the receptions
filled with fine woodwork
paintings and tapestry
it was all a work of art

i climbed up spiral stairs
taking it two at a time
excited that i was in his house
a place he called home

snooping around a bit
i walked on tip toes
silently searching for his room
not wanting to announce my presence yet
maybe i could surprise him in bed.

Five rooms later i finally found his room.
it was filled with his scent
that musky rain forest scent i had come to love
i swirled around his room, exhilarated.
My whole body filled with bliss
Enjoying every moment of my discoveries

i turn towards his bed.
How massive it was.
Large enough for a family of ten.
I imagine it would be our family
wife, husband and an army of kids
giggling i walked towards the bed

There lies my man,
my love, my prince
o how i loved him
and he me,
Closer now to the bed
he wasn't alone

who is this
it cant be
no, it mustn't
there lies my love
but in his arms..
in his arms...
there lay my brother
damn, the door was open..........

Fyi i dont have a brother hence this is purely fictional what do you think?

9 comments:

Chris Ogunlowo said...

This is cool.

D@AC said...

thank u.

Afrobabe said...

Lol…nice work…scarey thought…

D@AC said...

thaks afrobabe. yeah d idea is scary/. thankfully it aint real. at least not for me.

Nigerian Drama Queen said...

The last few lines were totally unexpected! Good work mate! And I 2nd Afrobabe-the idea is scary!!

D@AC said...

lol thanks girl

Afrobabe said...

hey, update....we demand an update nowwwwwwwwwww

D@AC said...

afrobabe lol.
as the queen demands. i shall update it soon. i shld ave but i've been busy. but asap i will
watch out

miz-cynic said...

tht kin sexy lover had beta not be gay